beginning:
Super-giant alien mothership has reached the moon
Clues and background:
①The drug-sprinkling pilot who was caught by aliens (aged, his brain is not very normal) and his big family (frustrated)...Three functions: a. Support the follow-up Area 51 and make it less obtrusive (Area 51) It is an important time, it is best to have a foreshadowing, but it is highly substitutable, and this clue is not necessarily required) b. Explain the alien invasion (there has been investigation, but the plot in Area 51 can be an alternative explanation.) c. Participate in the counter-offensive at the end (the most important role, enriching and forming the class united front of the world counter-offensive, and the final dramatization (that villain officer's office is superfluous, necessary for the drama of the final death, but more unnecessary plot))
② Pilot President and White House Spokesperson (colleague) (people are not satisfied with him) - President: young, pilot, blinded by his subordinates (Area 51, this motive is not handled well), bloody and steady, fierce battle on the front line (here It’s a release, although the final battle is impossible, but the degree of obscenity is too strong, which seriously weakens the solemn tone of this realistic alien invasion).
③The genius of environmentalism and his father in the nursing home (father and son) - features: environmental protection (canned food: small easter eggs), generals (small easter eggs), beat the president (similarly, the degree of obscenity is too strong, and it is extremely necessary, But it can be used as an opportunity to get on the line with the president? Should it be a better opportunity? This can be said to be the worst opportunity), airsickness, girlfriend White House spokesperson, technically excellent, people of color (India?), (I always feel that the eyes of geniuses are unpleasant, acting problem? Or the setting?)
④Ace pilot and stripper (blocked couple) - Victory cigar (small easter egg), fireworks for future son (small easter egg), frank swearing (Will feels that this style is not suitable, changing the style should not affect it, but Only the swear words and frankness are in line with the complementary characters of the last two protagonists), the third type of contact, strippers, rushing out of the earth to release nuclear bombs, and the ace pilot who is qualified for promotion but does not have the first contact with aliens - in short, it is given. There are too many characters, but almost every one has only one sentence or one or two shots, which are abrupt, pale, shallow... The shortcomings of multi-protagonist group portraits are obviously not handled well in this work, and several main characters have the same problem , one of the important factors limiting the upper limit of works. In addition, giving too much personality to the protagonist weakens the solemn tone of the world united front against alien invasion (such solemn tone is not suitable for an overly personalized protagonist.)
Round 1: The alien mothership will appear.
[Alien Mothership Line]: The best in the game. Solemnity, oppression, differentiation (brain wave communication), and nausea give a Cthulhu feeling, which perfectly fits the preset tone of the people of [Alien Invasion]. ——It’s a pity that the tour guide and the screenwriter made a difference in the human line, wasting this good line.
[Human Line]: Group portrait to create the feeling of a united front for all mankind, but only American heroes in the whole process (This is very important to shape a united front, but it has been neglected and not well portrayed.) Main 2+1+1: Genius and Ace+ The president + pesticide pilot, the primary and secondary treatment is okay, the background of the two couples under the background of the alien invasion weakens the background, it is a pity. (One pair is enough, two pairs are too much, the ace line couple line is unnecessary, and the solemn tone is diluted)
①It was captured by the United States and alerted the president, who said to have a look first; ②It affected the lives of the people, and the protagonist "genius" discovered the alien's countdown signal. ③Pesticide pilot and a big family
Round 2: The child ships of the alien mothership land on the earth, targeting major cities around the world, causing global panic.
①The president said that everyone should be quiet first, you can go, don't disturb others to appreciate the end of the world. ②The protagonist "Genius" felt that the "countdown" he got was incredible, and decided to go to his ex-girlfriend's White House spokesperson (with his father) ③The protagonist "Ace" discovered that the world had changed a lot and was ordered to return to the base in a hurry. ④The pesticide pilot shows his face, saying "I'm right", "I've been caught."... Sub-line: "I want to live with a fool like a monkey", "First lady", "Stripper"
[Note]: The facelessness and silence of the aliens here create a very solemn tone, which is very important.
Round 3: The sub-ship launches an attack, and most of the city is destroyed. ①The president left Washington at the last minute of the attack under the guidance of "genius". ...The president had a fight with a genius, which reflects the [uniqueness] of the two protagonists. The president is very unique. He has fought, been a pilot, and is young.
②The dancer didn't come and left, hiding in the shelter to save her life.
③ "Ace" and his teammates counterattack, but unfortunately because the enemy has a protective cover, he is the only one who survives and outsmarts an alien.
Round 4: The sub-ship attack is cooling down... [Quiet period before the outbreak]
①Under the unintelligible nonsense of the genius father, the 51 restricted area appeared (the pesticide pilots have crossed), the president was encouraged (the reason? It seems that it is not clear), and the aliens who were dissected (under the biological suit are Fragile body) and alien spaceship (cannot be decrypted, there is power at the moment)... This also gives the genius dad a chance to show his face, otherwise it would be unreasonable to occupy such a large space but not useful.
②The ace and the president/genius meet and know that he has captured an alien (here can be double-handed, a. honor, publicity, to cheer up the repressed hearts, saying that "aliens are not invincible", but this The direct confrontation with aliens is only once, and human beings believe in nuclear bombs, so it is not appropriate to use this method before the bottom is reached. b. Cold treatment means that the situation is difficult, and there is no intention to deal with it in desperation. This method b is used.)
③The dancer rescued the first lady. ——This is just closing the line, foreshadowing the ending of the first lady (which can inspire everyone’s heart to fight, as one of the depressing backgrounds before the big counterattack), strippers (? It seems that it is only one of the meanings of family fun, and the role of its identity is It's just that it is different from ordinary people who embody the "trump card"?)
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