This film reminded me of my elementary and junior high school life. My childhood nightmares generally included "reciting the full text" and "writing length of no less than 800 words". After the restriction, in fact, the style that is most likely to collapse is the feeling after reading and watching a certain article or a book.
When writing articles about people, you can easily adjust the number of words within 200 words by increasing or decreasing the number of events. For narrative articles, by adjusting the description of details, the frequency of adjective use, and the control of length is not difficult, but, after watching— —
First of all, let me express my dissatisfaction with the fact that the word count is not less than 800. Culture and art, as long as they are good, no matter how long they are, no one will complain. For example, for the past in America, Farewell My Concubine, the Base series, and the JOJO series, I have only heard people say that they have not watched it yet, so they can be longer. On the other hand, as long as this thing is good, no matter how short it is, no one will criticize it. For example, you can't say "Pharaoh, yesterday's Lanting preface was well written, will you copy the three-body next time?" You won't think Doraemon You have to pull out at least ten or eight kinds of guys in the episode, or you are not addicted, but the big adventure series is not addictive, except that you can make money by making movies, there is nothing new. Also, everyone is asking Luc Besson, you Lucy Why is it so short? The master just looked at the questioner very puzzled and said, "It's so short, don't you like it?"
It’s like telling a bong that you have up to three cigarettes a day, not many, and the result is that he still hasn’t quit smoking. You told Van Gogh that a painting should use at least 40 colors for me, Van Gogh. Gao said MMP in his heart. It is estimated that after completing the quantity requirements, it will be difficult for him to develop the Sunrise Impression and start using it. The fire yellow of the wheat field series has a large length. For human nature, the difference between the low limit and the high limit It's magical, it's like Eva Longoria once asked Tony Parker to cheat, but once a year at most, this kind of saying should be the biggest pushback against the honest and responsible French sports car not cheating in his life, you see, sure enough I will leave in a few years. My wife has helped me a lot in this regard. As long as I cheat once in my life, I will confiscate the tools. You see, this level is much higher than that of Hollywood serials. So in the future, if my daughter doesn't eat well, I will choose to tell her, "Fufu, eat at most two pieces of this meat." Instead of "minimum", of course, it also depends on her reaction. With her mother, maybe my heart is white.
The most ridiculous thing is that I was in the first few years of the college entrance examination. There was a child who wrote a classical Chinese style "Death of a White Horse" in the college entrance examination composition, and the next year another person who wrote classical Chinese style got a full score for the composition. A bunch of brothers in grades, every time they write an essay, they have to meet the two requirements of "classical Chinese" and "1200 or 1500 words". That pain, seeing the expressions on their faces when writing essays, makes me laugh out of sadness for them every time. Voice.
——The level of composition is low after reading. In my heart, the root cause is the above reasons. I remember that the teacher probably also required the standard form to condense and briefly describe the work first, and then put a revolutionary martyr to the top, and then express it. Take a look at the patriotic feelings in your heart, and finally wish the motherland will be better, right? And when you keep in mind the word limit, the arrangement of the format, and the correctness of the three views, many problems will arise. At first glance, I rely on it, it is already 600 words, and if you write more, it will be a waste of pen oil. It is inevitable that the front is loose and the back is tight. When you consider whether to move Huang Jiguang or Qiu Shaoyun out today, it is to quote Toye Torovsky When it was still the golden sentence of Wozki Shode, the far-fetched follow, and the emotional part may not be a big problem, not because everyone is really surging, but everyone is almost surging, Ordinary teachers don't pick it up. These factors have caused our country’s primary and junior high school students to produce hundreds of millions of similar garbage views every year. Teenagers under the age of 15 are the high-risk areas for the disease. After high school, everyone wrote argumentative essays, and the symptoms were alleviated ( Unfortunately, after the symptoms are relieved, it only enters the incubation period. After 10-20 years, when writing the report on the thoughts of party activists, the outbreak will be concentrated again, and the disease will become more serious).
To sum up the above, when art creation encounters too many restrictions, it becomes a high probability event to become garbage. Of course, I also admit that I have written a good post-view and thought report, but it should have a deeper inner drive. , after all, is a minority.
When he came back to this film, everyone gave him a good evaluation. I also watched this film after listening to the recommendation of the first episode of "Telechat". I had great expectations and was very disappointed after watching it. .
The whole film, from events, ideas, screenwriting, production, casting, music, shots, scenes, and performances are all above the passing line and are of a high standard, but the finished film feels far from "Challenge Sunday" or "Victory Escape" , the reason is that he can't give me a feeling of excitement and shock. As a sports movie, this is considered a total failure.
On paper, a former women's basketball coach who, in an era of racism, led black players no other team received, overcame all odds, won the NCAA series, and changed how other teams and even the nation treated black players. Opinion, no problem with the big plot, difficulty finding players during the period, building trust with players, being infected by the creativity of the players, helping the team overcome the threat of racism, dramatic victory, historic victory, narrative of the middle line There is no problem, let the rebellious players surrender, let the players who are afraid of confrontation be brave, let the black and white players in the team integrate and respect each other, and always catch the puppy love of the team ace, Ms. Rupp expressed from the side. The American sports world and the American attitude towards black players, these details are not wrong, why can't this movie move me when the plot is reasonable, the three views are correct, the production is well-made, and the performance is exquisite?
The problem lies in the structure and rhythm. The rhythm of the film is too smooth and laid out. The description of each scene is as precise as the stage play, but it falls into the rhythm of the stage play, ignoring the film's emphasis on important plots, and at the same time. It seems to have forgotten the movie's control of the audience's emotions, any sports movie, the difficult team formation like One Piece - primary conflict - small victory in a group - tragic destruction - hero Carry - facing Boss - looking for teeth all over the place ——The base love erupts——The combat power explodes——The structure of the ultimate counter-kill is not wrong. This movie is also played like this, but he put the above-mentioned various small plots, regardless of the importance, on the audience. In front of the audience, it is difficult for the audience to find the most important plot line in each act of roughly equal importance, such as the stadium punishment plot triggered by the heroine, the team ace's complaints and the content of the coach's first meeting with him Basically the same, in other words, there is no need to appear at all. From the current version of this movie, it makes no difference whether there is a heroine or not. To put it bluntly, as long as before the national finals, she is not giving birth to a child, miscarriage, being hit by a car, or having leukemia. To die, there is a situation where the ace has to stay by his side, which brings great difficulties to the main plot. Then her value in this movie is too small. Of course, based on historical events, we can be loyal to history, history The above is like this, but the art has to be refined. Her plot shows that the team ace will pick up girls, and the team ace fool doesn't know that the coach is committing crimes downstairs. Buying time, complaining by the way, seducing the coach Yikusitian, the team ace before the final team battle, like Kiss girlfriend, these plots, really, are useless, for a sports movie, loyal to eight poles can't beat Let’s not talk about the history of the movie. The audience’s attention and thinking are spent too much in those plots. When the really important plot happens, it is difficult to quickly feel emotionally substituting with the main line. I am troubled You recall, the same team's main player was injured, and the rebounding machine was injured. This is a big thing in basketball-themed works. How many seconds did this movie give? Think about it again, how many pages did Takehiko Inoue give you when Sakuragi Flower Road fell?
The entire movie is described in positive sequence, which strengthens the sense of drama of the movie. In fact, in addition to exposing the significance of the game for the black players to turn over, it can also express many racial and social issues, such as why the American society at that time It is generally believed that the ability of black players to withstand pressure is poor, the living conditions of black players in other players, etc., because good works should first reflect the contradiction between people and themselves, rise to the contradiction between people and the environment, and finally reflect people and society. However, he reflected very little of the conflicts at the medium and small levels, except that the coach went to recruit a bench front, the assistant coach made people strip his pants, the restaurant was humiliated, the hotel was stolen, etc., and he was very secretive, which made me feel the lack of relevant content. Of course, it is possible that these historical phenomena that do not need to be explained to the Americans were taken by the director tacitly, so he is at least extremely unfriendly to young Americans and foreigners. Well, if your target audience is people who experienced that era, then don't blame me for giving a low score, I'm not interested in establishing such a tacit understanding with you.
I still feel sorry for this movie. His production is top-notch, and the selection of historical events is also very meaningful. Even the script on paper is not flawed. Unfortunately, he was chosen by the director regardless of priority. Narrative method, the film does not have a focus, lacks the film itself to guide the audience's perspective and thinking, and many content rely on brain supplements, knowing smiles and other means to achieve the effect, the director is like a script, thinking about 120 minutes to shoot The 15-year-old Chinese boy in the video describes the history in great detail in the narrative, showing the team's failures and infighting according to the rules and scripts, uniting again, defeating the powerful enemy, and completing the historical mission. But I can't see the director's own thoughts on this matter. I analyze that he may not be a basketball fan, so he is not very good at how to express the tension of basketball. In fact, a director only needs to follow his own ideas and lead the audience to After playing for two hours, everyone will feel very cool, like Tim Burton, don't think about it, just follow me, it's cool.
All in all, the director successfully completed the copy-style expression of the script and successfully visualized the script. Most people's moving comes from the inevitable moving brought by the unique structure of sports movies, and the director's improvement of a movie. , I didn't realize it except in photography, scenes, music, etc. So, this eldest brother may call him a director a little biased. It would be more appropriate to say that he is a more responsible project manager.
I think there should be more than 1500 words, and submit it.
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