As a secret room movie, the script is unacceptably rough.
In a secret room movie, the story of the entire movie will take place in a small room, and the unfolding and development of the story is limited.
At this time, only a very delicate story structure and subtle propulsion can make the movie not boring.
The script for the ultimate interview sucks from multiple angles:
1) Character setting is meaningless:
Those who came to the final interview were screened at various levels. What a coincidence, what a coincidence in the previous screening of Lunci, it happened that all the candidates were from different races? If it is intentional, what is the point of doing this? no.
According to the founder spokesperson at the end of the photo, they want a caring employee. How did Brother India and Xiaobai pass the previous screening? gab.
Xiao Hei said that the candidates here not only come from different races, but also have unique skills. It's a pity that only the little black brother Einstein, the psychology glasses girl, the less clear Indian boy, and the irritable old brother Xiaobai (if irritability is also a skill) showed his skills from beginning to end. The other characters are not reflected at all, and the most terrible thing is that the final winner, Blonde Beauty, has no skills? ? ? And in the whole process, the blonde girl is a complete melon eater. She is not the initiator every time a major plot advances, she just keeps watching! (Well, she remembered smashing lights with high heels.)
2) The answer to the story has nothing to do with the plot at all:
Lights, liquids, tearing paper, not allowed out of the room, fingerprint pistols, voice-activated lights, smoke alarms, lighters, cameras, timers, medicines, parents, aunts and aunts are sick, glasses girl's leg injury , The silver coin of the Indian brother is very nervous and exciting, right? However, all these things, and the answer, finished! Complete! none! close! The answer is just a brain teaser, and there is no point in laying so much suspense. All objects are set purely to advance the story, and have nothing to do with the main goal of the film (screening out caring, decisive employees).
3) Bug(s)
The setting that Xiaobai tore the paper of the Asian woman and didn't get out of the game was forgotten by everyone in the later stage. If you want to eliminate Xiaobai who is in a coma, he must let him spill his own paper?
Blonde told Xiao Hei to throw the gun out, and the same is true, could it be possible to push Xiao Bai out before? In the end, the blond girl can't be out of the game with one foot in the room, it's not too much to push someone out.
The guard never explained why to those who failed, but in the end, he showed Xiaobai his watch, and his personality changed.
Above, I am very suspicious that the editor did not have time to revise the draft again, and did not do an outline before starting to write.
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