what happened to some of the handbag-like clips? It's not a voyeur, just a still shot.
Originally, it is understandable to use the method of filming to do animation, but in any case, the transition should not be so abrupt! I don't ask you to show off your skills here, but there is always a sense of continuity.
The sudden sound of thunder was particularly awkward, and the shot should have been left for a few seconds before cutting the sky.
The beating/beating part was supposed to be a climax, why did it suddenly cut the scene?
It's a bit too long for you to leave blank, right?
Why did you suddenly get excited at the end?
A few times I felt that the background music was a little long ("Soundtrack Poem Recitation"). But overall it's pretty good.
The script doesn't work. No glaring flaws, but nothing spectacular. It should still be left to a scripter to write.
I said, you should go and cooperate with Uncle Kuan. Uncle Kuan can do the original storyboard, and Brother Cheng can help with photography.
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