Come on, buddy, make a half-hour sketch, save this brain-damaged script

Lukas 2022-03-21 09:03:00

One-sentence short comment: It's really fucking unimaginative. The actors and acting skills are set to nine points. The music, editing, scenes and scenes are all good, but the script is too fucking unimaginative.

In this drama, there are too many things that a human being can write. Originally, it was a human nature movie, but the screenwriter made it a waste. It can only make the male and female protagonists into a single muscle, make a child, and still know the ending, but he is reluctant to kill . The key is that many plots are useless at all, the male protagonist is a painter, what can a painter do, a painter? The heroine is a translator, what can a translator do?

Come on, the text begins.

If I decide, the male lead should be a taxi driver, and the female lead should be a plant grower, and then the family owes money. The two moved out of the city and bought a cheap house to live in.

The house is quite big, but the price is very cheap. These two people thought they had picked it up, and they set a buckle at the back. In fact, this house is a haunted house. It was lived in 60 or 70 years ago, and then it was abandoned.

The taxi driver should have a background. The background story is that he is an uneducated high school graduate who can only make money from Didi. He is very tired. He only needs to have a house to live in. He doesn't care about the distance. The whole car made the driver feel lustful.

But the heroine is a liberal arts woman, who is cold-hearted and devoted to studying plants. She also makes herself rough and wants to cultivate new flowers. After moving, the man goes to the market and the woman grows flowers at home.

Then, when I was cleaning up the house, I found the magical house, so I muttered to myself in the house, "This house is so dark, it would be nice if there was a chandelier here."

click

A chandelier appeared, and then the hostess was shocked, "Wow, give me a wallpaper! Murals! This room was neatly tidy up, and then sat in the newly decorated room and said, "It would be nice if there were flowers and plants for decoration. (deduction)"

Then the heroine began to have an explosion of imagination, what flowers you want, boom! , and then the house couldn't be put down and I took it out. When I took it out, I found that it was finished and the flowers withered (notice that the outside world is accelerated aging rather than instant death)

Wow, it suddenly dawned on me, and the audience also understood.

At this time, the male protagonist came back. After listening to the female protagonist, I thought it was very interesting. I thought to myself that he would have to subvert his life. It seemed that he would not be able to make money.

In the beginning, it was wine, good wine and good cigarettes served, this is a little bit of human nature.

Then the food, then the drugs and guns, and finally he said no, give me a bitch, and then there was a great female friend, and the storm turned

Then the heroine said no, let's have a male friend, click, turn the clouds over the rain,

Just like that, the house was torn into two factions, but all the "servants" were summoned. They got tired of playing and let it kill itself. Anyway, seeing the light and dying of old age,

Then the two of them said don't make trouble and okay, let's quit work, and we've been playing like this for a long time, and then the two of them started to reconcile.

But this time the heroine is pregnant! Wow, the story behind it is fucking wonderful

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Isn't it, is it possible to save more than ten or twenty percent?

But the trouble is, I think at the end of the movie, that kid is stupid, it could have been set as "this door and the door in that room, the world leading to it is a direct mirror image, and then the world is constructed as "the lights won't flicker." , the keys don't have to be spelled and hidden", come to a multiverse, and think about the script carefully, it's really a relatively good movie. At least one star can be saved in this way.

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