very bad plot

Benny 2022-03-25 08:01:01

One star for dance, one star for music, the plot is so bad, so many characters, no one character's story is complete. The characters in the film include black women, black men, producers, dancers, actresses, singers, Asian women, ballet men, and directors.


Let's talk about the supporting lines first. The two lines of black men and dancing women are unreasonable. These two lines are too long, but the meaning expressed is very small and unclear. Even if their stories are meaningful in their own right, it feels like the director is trying to capture art school in a variety of ways, success, failure, separation from loved ones, abandoning dreams, seeking shortcuts, ignoring one thing and another, and rekindling hope. But these two lines are not good and waste time. Judging from the results, this movie will look better and more reasonable without these two characters. -------------It was not filmed well------------The story of the dancing girl is the worst, every time she appears, the time line of the shot jumping is wide and abrupt , The dancing girl's dance is inserted inexplicably without cause and effect. The dance is beautiful, but it has nothing to do with the whole movie, and the ending is separated by a few words, which is a complete waste of time. There are at least two episodes of the black man talking about his sister's accident, and the ending of the quarrel with his mother didn't say what happened later. Then when he graduated, the teacher asked him to open his heart, otherwise it would end if he couldn't act well. The plot of the character. The story of the production man is quite inexistent, with a beginning and no end. After the breakup, he appeared in the episode of the black woman singing in the bar and then disappeared. He really has no ending at all. -------------It's okay------------ The story of the director man was pretty good, why did the ending give me all the money I want to make before I turn 30 Dad's words and a selfie short video chicken soup at the end? The story length of Asian women and ballet men is more in line with the positioning of the supporting role's story line, and it can show the diversity of the film, and it has a beginning and a tail. -------------To sum up ------------- If the above three black men, dancing women, and making men's stories are shortened to about the same length as Asian women's ballet men, Then increase the length of the main characters, and the movie will be much better.


Let's talk about the protagonist. In fact, the actress who plays the actress is one of my favorite actresses. However, the ending of the script is too bad. The ending of the actress and the singer is very hasty. There is a quarrel in fifty-five seconds, and a reconciliation in fifty seconds. The ending of the black woman is very hasty, and the quarrel and reconciliation lasted for fifty-eight seconds. Do you want to set a record? The mother's previous attitude was completely different from the ending's attitude. It was very abrupt without the transition, and it was not the same mother at all. -------------To sum up ------------- The story content of the protagonist line itself is not a big problem, but it is too hasty, giving me a feeling: you have already spent Forty minutes to talk about the beginning and the process, why only two minutes to talk about the conflict and the end?


Dance and music are piled up throughout the film. If the duration of the dancing woman and black man could be shortened, the plot of the director man could be adjusted, and the ending time of the main characters could be reassigned, the movie would be much better. Instead of making me think after reading it: is that so? In addition, the ending will be much better if the ending is changed from collective singing and dancing to the composition of roles. It is far-fetched for students from different departments to forcibly squeeze into singing and dancing. After dancing, the end is very, very far-fetched. After all, it is not a pure dance theme. Demonstrate the original intention of diversity.

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Fame quotes

  • Marco: She's hot, but she thinks she's like the most talented person in the school.

    Victor Tavares: So maybe she is.

  • Malik Washburn: [from trailer] Mom, I'm talented!

    Malik's Mom: And who in the world told you you were so special?

    Malik Washburn: You did.