How to make this shitty movie right

Mireille 2022-10-31 01:15:11

I'm learning to write stories recently, so I want to try to change the plot of this bad movie, at least tell the story round, and see if it can be more exciting.

Theme: "To Care About Teenagers"

Characters:
1. The leader is the son of a detective. Extremely sensitive by nature. In the process of accompanying his mother to die and taking care of his younger brother, he gradually developed a hatred for the detective father. He has a high IQ and careful thinking, and understands his opponent, the detective father. The opportunity he gave his father was a white room, but during the crime, his father, as always, never entered the room to visit him.
2. Christine is the second-in-command in the gang, and she plays the role of threading the needle in the story. With a fragile personality and an unfortunate past, and a little romance with the leader, it can explain why she took on the murder charge in the first place, and it can also fully and gradually guide the detective to realize that she is right in her confrontation with the detective in prison. family neglect.
3. The third-in-command is a computer genius, also a dark boy ignored by his parents. His death was due to suicide after completing the task of the organization.
4. The gay kid who killed his brother. I can't think of how many dramas he has, just to add a little footnote to "the way parents are indifferent to teens".
5. Detective, a good detective and a bad father who is too busy at work to ignore the family.

Storyline:
Snow, the fetus on the plate (and not the teeth, why can't the detective have a background in obstetrics) That fetus belongs to Christine's mother.
Zhang Ziyi appeared directly as the biggest suspect, and she confessed.
Playing on Kristen's neuroticism and the warmth of her family (Christine goes to church with her father and the rest of the family, along with gay kids and internet geniuses), this church is also where the detectives go.
The detective's immediate judgment on the birth of a murderer in such a family is that she hates the fetus for taking away the love of the parents. Then she found out that she had been sexually abused by her adoptive father, and finally found out that she had been sexually abused by her adoptive father, but her mother knew about it but did not stop her. Step-by-step uncovering the layers of Christine's neuroticism.
But at this time, the detective found that Christine could not be the murderer (such as haloemia or the like). At the same time, it is found that she has a kind and fragile heart, and she also expects love for an unknown object.
While the motive for this murder was gradually discovered, but the case became more complicated, the second murder scene (the gay brother who killed the brother) was discovered, and the modus operandi was the same as the first case. The boy showed up at the church where he was caught "in his spare time" while the detective was praying with his family.
In the revelation of the church service, the detective realizes that there should be four victims in this case. Learned that Kristen knew gay boys and another missing boy in another case (Internet genius).
Detectives connect them and investigate the background of the cyber genius, who also has an unhappy childhood and family, and discover that they share the same beliefs and doctors.
When I learned about the situation from the doctor (I found that my wife had also brought their children to this medical institution for treatment, and the eldest son was still receiving treatment here, but he didn't know it), I received news that the missing Internet genius had been discovered. , is dead. The room has video footage of being burned. Another killer appears in the video, not Kristen, not gay, another masked boy.
During the conversation with Christine, the detective felt that what was missing in the child's heart was not only in the unfortunate family, but also in the lack of love. The person she likes is the masked boy in the video. This boy has a mortal belief and a purpose of sacrifice. He has no hope of love, but still tries to protect Christine, avenge her but not let her do it.
The detective's two sons invite their father to a party of so-and-so in the same game clothes as the masked boy in the video. But the detective is once again dragged away by the job.
In the police station, Christine asked to see the detective, and told him to go to a certain place by himself immediately, and the next victim was there.
Detectives discovered an unused crime scene at that location. The detective thinks on his own, the son comes, smothers him with drugs, and finally hangs himself in front of his father.


The answer:
These children met in church and went to a doctor for treatment together. In the process, they reached a consensus and became a criminal gang called the "Four Horsemen". The modus operandi is to imitate their shared religious fascination and stream it online.
These videos belong to a certain dark teenager exclusive site. The victimization process in the video is full of painful struggles, regrets, the thrill of revenge, and the fanatical thought of saving the world by oneself. Countless teenagers are watching the videos online as the victims die, fueling more desperate anger and frenzy. His suicide, with the assistance of the organization, strictly followed all the rules of organized killing, and his death is part of these videos - which explains the meaning of the "plague" in the story of the Four Horsemen.
The fourth victim is the leader himself. The detective watched him die, entered his room, opened the website in front of his computer, and he fell into deep soul-searching. And in time to prevent the upcoming larger-scale murder/suicide, the ending is fixed on the front page of "We Are Nothing".

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Extended Reading

Horsemen quotes

  • Kristin: Death is what happens at the end. War is everything else.

  • Kristin: Would you rather be dead or live the rest of your life without your soul mate?