One of the main plot clues of this drama is the father complex of the heroine Courtney.
No one knows the specific principle of the Star Staff. The heroine arbitrarily believes that Xingxia is the father she hasn't seen in ten years just because she can use the Star Staff. This is obviously a common story routine. First let the protagonist believe a certain lie, work hard for the lie, and then reveal the truth. After the protagonist accepts the truth, he grows up balabala... Later, the heroine discovers that her biological father is actually a jerk.
But to adopt this kind of routine, you must first design a reasonable story environment to support the lie. If the lie is obviously unreasonable, it is to let the people in the play speak nonsense with their eyes open and fool the audience as a fool.
This is the case in this drama. The heroine's strong father recognition complex has never been well explained. The first episode only talked about her mother's remarriage, moving to a new school and being isolated. These things are related to Xingxia being a father and inheriting the superhero identity. What is the necessary connection to fight against the isa? You can only rely on the audience's own brain to make up for it, even if you use a simple and rude talk scene like cw to explain the heroine's psychological activities with lines.
In the later part, I started to show the star staff. To be honest, there are many superhero themes nowadays. The concept of the star staff is not new, and the special effects are not particularly eye-catching. However, the screenwriter said that if you want to show it, you want to show it (the wild cat climbs the wall in the back is also inexplicable. a highlight moment). The heroine got the star stick and ran out to blow up the "bad boy" car, went home and listened to the explanation from her stepfather, and then ran out to play gymnastics for no reason, and then she encountered brain waves.
In the same night, I ran out of the house twice, which almost took up half of the first episode, but the portrayal of the heroine was insufficient. "My dad is a star man" should have an emotional resonance: "I miss the father's love in my childhood + I think my dad is a star man → So I want to inherit my father's career". However, the emotions contained in the gifts left by the biological father were not specifically expressed in the play, and the gymnastics past also passed by, as if the heroine did not care much about being separated from familiar things, but suddenly began to yearn for a sense of belonging, and identified herself as soon as her head became hot. It is super second generation.
It is absolutely possible to do less superpower shows and add more scenes showing father's love, such as "The heroine looked at the necklace and remembered the memory of learning to do cartwheels when she was a child and getting praise from her father. The warm atmosphere of the women's room still makes the heroine miss it very much..." sort of. It is also possible to add some clues to the memories, suggesting that the warmth of the father and daughter was just an illusion, but it may be too demanding for the screenwriter of this play.
The frivolous motives combined with the heroine's various reckless behaviors not only make it difficult for the audience to empathize with the characters, but also lack emotional impact when revealing the truth about the heroine's life experience later.
The first episode should usually be the hardest to portray the characters, but the only highlight of this episode is the cutscene where JSA goes at the beginning. Judging from this quality, all kinds of intellectual developments later in the season can be said to be expected. .
As for who wrote the script for the first episode...
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Schrödinger's Time Man:
At the beginning of the first episode, after Xia was stolen by the warlock, from the special effect of the round hole, it should have been punched through the chest by energy. At the beginning of the fifth episode, it was said that Shi Xia and his wife discovered ISA's plan in Blue Valley, and they were killed by Grandi. Attacked in a car accident.
Ten years ago, the JSA group was destroyed, and Xingtiao fled from the scene. Later, JSA's equipment was placed in the lobby. Should Xingtiao sneak back to pick up the corpse and clothes after the event?
So Shi Xia was punched through the chest by the energy and didn't die? Xingtiao said that he didn't know Shi Xia was dead, so Shi Xia threw down the diary hourglass/entrusted the diary hourglass to Xingtiao, and went home with his wife to run away? ISA knew that Shi Xia didn't die and sent Grandi to silence, but didn't chase Starstripe?
Has there really been a good communication between the screenwriters of the diversity script?
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Writing the role of Yolanda with the thinking of a normal person will definitely be designed so that she regains her confidence after becoming a superhero, reconciles with her family, regains recognition, and walks out of the shadows... The emotions expressed are upward.
This show is good, Yolanda is confident, but her family's prejudice against her has not changed at all. The reason for her to wear a wild cat uniform has become to vent her anger, and finally even kill people in an extremely bloody way, which is completely degenerate. character arc.
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