Modify the script for poor Julian

Dominique 2022-03-03 08:01:28

Poor Julian, used by two women, and finally framed by his brother.
(Because June said she really loves Terry, and it was June who called Julian, Anna didn't trust Julian in the end)
Terry was just lucky and only thought of putting the blame on when he found the phone.
The two women are ordinary people.

The real conspirator is the lobby manager, who is the one behind the scenes who writes the story in a series of close-ups at the beginning.
"He didn't do it for money"
He understood everything from the beginning.

The real protagonist is the manager. Because if there is no need to show the character Julian loses his phone, there can be a different ending. The
script can make Julian's phone mute so that Terry can't find it, and finally Julian wins. And this is the ending I want. The perfect conspiracy.

In fact, it can be expressed like this, this movie is more profound: the
original story is very good, slightly modify the script: (generally, of course, many details need to be modified)

Change 1: Even if Julian is not with June,
Terry actually wants to marry from the beginning It's Julian's fault, so he called Julian,
he knew that Julian would definitely come, so that Julian could be blamed for the murder.
Change 2: Julian's phone was not found by Terry or Julian didn't drop the phone. In
this way, Terry still showed that he wanted to blame Julian without knowing it, and Julian realized this.
So far, the second climax of the film: Terry's betrayal of Julian's friendship
The first one: The previous betrayal was June and Julian's betrayal to Terry, and June and Julian didn't really betray Terry, because June said she really loved Terry, so the second climax (Terry blamed Julian from beginning to end) More than the first climax (June cheating), the
most important thing is to deal with the role of the lobby manager, retain his identity as a conspirator, plan everything, help Terry, and ultimately fail.
Terry was arrested by the police, and the manager didn't win or lose. (The original script manager and Terry win)
Julian and June's adultery is not exposed.

How good is that. The content is more profound. There's more to think about
than the pure childish cliché of "good guys win, bad guys get punished".

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