2. How an assassin entered the palace to assassinate the king,
3. Why did the two assassins show mercy to the
king before , 4. Did the king find any flaws in the dialogue,
5. Why did the assassin fail... …
here are some of the things I’d like to see in this film , which I randomly listed.
Structurally, it's a good script. Laomouzi's big skeleton is good, but he fails in the details.
Now let me tell you how I would make such a story.
First of all, the background of the era is set in the late Ming Dynasty. Let’s simply tell a story similar to the Jade Blood Sword, where the assassin stabbed Chongzhen.
In this way, 3 and 5 can be solved with Laomouzi's "world", provided that the soft-hearted assassins are rational Han people. It just happened to give a lot of people a history lesson.
4 This is very interesting, Chongzhen's character is interesting, and the dialogue is interesting. I think the design of Chongzhen is really revealing his scheming, but the purpose can be used as a test.
Assassination motive, this Chongzhen killed a lot of loyal ministers, find a reliable one, or not add eunuchs to disrupt the situation, depending on the situation.
At the end, according to historical records, Chongzhen hanged himself in Meishan, and his suicide note verified that he was a king with a heart of the world.
But we must pay attention to the tragedy of Chongzhen's character to show, to make the audience feel more complicated about this character, we use fake stories to draw real people.
The change in the Assassin's Anonymous mentality also showed, and the ending made him miserable. If the design of Chongzhen is too cruel, let Wuming fight to kill a bad eunuch; the cruel version let the assassin commit suicide.
Welcome downstairs to overthrow or modify and refine my version.
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