It seems like the process of writing a proposition composition in high school. Looking at the title, thinking about it for a long time, finding a story that fits the theme, and wanting to be a little bit more ambitious, so we need to set a delicate beginning, a strong and methodical narrative in the middle, and finally, show your ambition and point the topic. Full of self-satisfaction, consciously have bright spots, but not high scores?
It is said that rough diamonds symbolize the primitive desires of people. I think... According to the words of the teacher who approved the papers in high school: It can be said that you have deducted the question, and the angle is also acceptable. But there are too many superfluous parts, the narrative is sloppy, and it cannot attract the readers' attention. .
Although we still complain in our hearts, we are unwilling that the teacher can't get it, cut it! But the final score is what it is now!
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