Casual screenwriter

Margaretta 2022-01-14 08:02:17

I don’t know any bastard who changed the file name of eDonkey to Bournemouth 4, which made me puzzled and watched the whole movie, and then I went back to the front to find the title before I knew I was fooled.

The whole film feels so-so, with no highlights. I won’t talk about the old-fashioned plot, but the screenwriter, at any rate, put a little thought into making the story more complete. Shaking his head while watching——

1. Smuggling arms is not surprising, and it is not surprising that they are shipped to Mozambique. The strange thing is the anti-radar equipment. Please, have never been to Africa and read the news, right? The African Civil War was a world of machetes, AKs, and bazookas, and neither used nor could afford such high technology.

2. Smuggling arms from the United States to Africa, I don't know how many links go through, and I don't know how many people have evidence. How many pages of paper are the evidence of the same baby? Can't be convicted without those few pages of loading slip?

3. Computer-printed documents cannot be used as evidence at all. The only proof is the signature of the black boss on the documents. But, a bit of common sense, OK, the black boss is always talking about things, he will sign his name on the shipping list? Do you treat him as a warehouse supervisor?

4. Well, even if this is the only evidence, so what? I don't understand the law. I have at least heard of the Simpson case. As long as the lawyers are strong, there is no guarantee that anyone can be sued. Well, even if this is evidence that the case will win, so what? Don't you just go to jail, can you rob the CIA? The court sanctions you use the law, and the CIA sanctions you use guns. If you are chased by a Beijing horn, would you turn around and kick the tiger fiercely and tell him to give way?

5. Forget it, fight the boss at the end, don't be so perfunctory to the audience. Just a few pages of A4 paper, you carry a big and heavy suitcase to deliver the goods, don't those black bosses and top killers care?
As soon as the suitcase is opened, it is obvious that the bottom of the suitcase is very high, don't care? Such a life-threatening thing, just glance at it and leave without taking it out to check if it is the original or is it missing?

The plot is weak, the scene is weak, if you really panic idly, then watch it

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  • Ben Logan: Did I tell you I found a place we can watch baseball? In Ghent? Ex-pat community? I thought we could go there, hang out? Fun?

    Amy Logan: I hate baseball.

    Ben Logan: When your mom and I first met, we used to go to games all the time.

    Amy Logan: Yeah, if it was so great, then why'd you leave?

  • Amy Logan: Why would someone you work with, try to kill us?

    Ben Logan: Amy, listen to me. I don't know what's going on here. Come here.

    [Ben cleans blood off Amy's face]

    Ben Logan: The safest place for you to be right now is at my side, listening to what I tell you. Will you do that for me? Will you trust me?