[Original] Some test drafts

Tiffany 2022-04-22 07:01:55

Part1

Do you still remember the drift bottle in the QQ mailbox? Unknown mood and unknown netizens used to be the way for many people to express their thoughts. Can you believe that anyone really relies on a drift bottle for communication? (00:36 - 1:14) The man was listening to the phone, his eyes were staring straight ahead, and there were unnoticeable tears in his sluggishness. He thanked the other end of the phone firmly. (You have strengthened my thoughts even more... Happy Life Interest Free Loan Bank thank you for your call, goodbye) The moment he hung up the phone, tears filled his eyes, and when the scene changed, it turned out that he had been standing on the edge of the bridge. . He looked at his feet, the dim river water under the bridge made him a little dizzy and hesitant, but after a big car passed by, the man disappeared. This phone call made him firm up the idea of ​​leaving this world.

The sparkling river water came into view, and a wet man was lying on the shore, and he was still alive! Covered with sand, broken cell phone, lost a shoe, and written all over! You can't die, it's useless! In a jungle full of rubbish and an unknown island, the man could not find his way out no matter how he walked. He was exhausted, staring blankly at the towering bridge piers, pillowing on the newspaper pawn bed, and the night of the city accompanied him to sleep. When he woke up in the morning, the man was pleasantly surprised to see the boat, forgot his death, and began to actively save himself. For the first time, the passengers on the boat thought that the man was saying hello and did not stop. The second time, I wrote a big help on the beach (I turned into Robinson 06:23) The third time, I turned on my phone, the battery was in critical condition, I called 119 for help, and was hung up as a joke. The fourth time I called my wife, the woman had already broken with him and hung up indifferently. The fifth time, finally, a phone call came, but it was Sk Telecom to sell the business. The man hurriedly called for help, the customer service spoke to himself, the man's anxious cry for help mixed with the chattering sales voice, the only one who took the initiative to contact him at this moment. The phone only cares about the business value of him, and the last trace of power is exhausted, the phone is turned off, and the man's only hope of contacting the outside world has disappeared. The last time I tried, I just had to swim over. The man trembled to cheer himself up, walked to the middle of the river beach, and almost drowned himself with a thud. Memories appear alternately as the man flops up and down in the water: 1. When I was a child, my father taught swimming (everyone can swim, why only you can't. 2. The three bosses criticized his performance for being unqualified (because the company was reorganized, the man went bankrupt) The man apologized 3. The young wife smokes a cigarette and asks: Which is worse? Too much work or incompetence? Immediately get up and leave. At this time, four beach beauties in cool clothes are dotted with bright flowers from head to toe, and their hair is flying. Brushing their enthusiastic faces, youthful waists twisted and twisted wantonly, and the grass skirts between the hips couldn't stop shaking with the hot dance (Happy borrowing is looking for a happy life interest-free loan) (12:16-12:55) Exactly The loan recommended by this beauty pushed the man into where he is now.

He vomited and climbed ashore and returned to reality, laughing at himself that "leaving here won't change anything." Planning to hang himself, at this time, the sound of the air defense exercise siren (13:58) came from the city. Fear gave him a chance to continue to live, and the man decided to wait until he died. Sudden stomach upset, no matter whether there is a hand or paper or not, I squatted down and took off a petal (salvia flower), ate one petal after another, it was sweet, and the man began to cry without mentioning his pants. Perhaps it was this sweetness that made a man nostalgic for this world. He decided to temporarily survive, drinking the turbid river water and eating wild mushrooms. He smoked a cigarette, looked at his ID card, threw away a pile of credit cards with debts, and discarded the chains that bound him in the real world. The man got up and howled at the traffic on the other side, took off his pants, and then took off his underwear, shaking his lower body violently unscrupulously, venting his dissatisfaction to the city in the dark, accusing the loan of poisoning him.

The next day, when the man was picking up rubbish, he saw an abandoned duck boat in the jungle, so he dragged it to build his own house (a house that he had spent seven years saving and never bought), where he was at ease as an ugly duckling (not a swan). ), the duck boat gave comfort to the man's family, and the huge help on the beach became hello. (22:14) It seems that the man has reconciled with the situation in front of him, and plans to stay on this isolated island with peace of mind. As an urban waste wood white-collar worker who pierced his feet with a fork and climbed a tree five centimeters off the ground, how will he be desolate? Island Survival?

Part2:

If you, who are accustomed to modern and convenient life, are isolated on an isolated island, how will you survive on a deserted island? Look at this man, he tried his best to modify his tools (22:23) fishing, catching ducks, catching birds, all in vain, he was clumsy, he pierced his feet with forks, climbed trees five centimeters off the ground, bird droppings often It fell on his head earlier than the egg. Fortunately, there is no such thing as a way out. While washing bird shit, a dead fish floated out of the water, and the man finally ate the protein he had been dreaming about. In the early morning of the next day, he harvested a dead bird from the fish bone, and was intoxicated and happy to barbecue. The man was lying on the grass, surrounded by beautiful flowers. He opened his eyes to the sound of birdsong, and smiled comfortably, enjoying his complete boredom. He doesn't know yet that his life has already been seen by a girl.

(27:19) In the dark room, the girl showed her image of a beautiful and golden city beauty on the Internet, Chanel's high heels, the latest bag of the season, just click the mouse to save and upload, everything has become my own. It turns out that all the photos of her on the Internet were stolen from others and packaged by ps. There are a lot of messages on the screen and it looks like she is very popular online. In stark contrast, however, is the girl's pile of trash and canning rooms. She has been out of the room for three years, the doors and windows are closed, the window is full of clothes, and she sleeps in the cupboard. Eating canned corn for breakfast and counting calories started her self-disciplined and autistic day, wearing a pedometer to exercise against the wall, working at nine o'clock, and cleaning the keyboard. Avoid my father in the morning and my mother at noon, eat instant noodles, and breathe fresh air against the fan. Unlike the girl's vain and sloppy daytime life, she seems to be romantic at night, and she likes to photograph the moon (there is no one in the moon, so you can't feel lonely 32:18) and photographed a whole wall. A happy and busy day is coming to an end, and if you can't walk 10,000 steps, you will manually shake it up. Dad came home at nine o'clock, and the girl got into the closet to hypnotize herself. (Forget today, face every day truthfully)

There are only two special occasions when the girls will be photographed during the day, because there are only twenty minutes in a year and the city can be empty. She looked nervously at the hands and started the countdown. At the last second, the wonderful fate of a man and a girl happened quietly at the moment when the air defense exercise alarm sounded. The girl's camera kept scanning every corner of the rare empty city. She saw the huge help on the beach and the man hanging in the jungle. She pressed the shutter subconsciously, but was frightened and quickly pulled the curtain. , hide in the closet. Hypnosis was useless, the girl couldn't help but came to the window again and saw that the man was still alive, she was sincerely fortunate, but witnessed the scene of the man taking off his pants. After that, the girl lost interest in the news on the Internet, and began to use the camera to interact with the man every day: the man couldn't pull the duck boat, the girl gently put her finger in front of the camera, and pushed the man through the camera, and the help became Hello. The girl's closed heart gradually opens up as the man lives freely on the island.

The man was playing golf with a loose ball, entertaining himself quite comfortably, and wearing two glasses made from the bottom of a beer bottle. A ship passed by, and the man quickly hid. He was completely satisfied with the life in front of him. At this moment, a package of instant fried noodles caught the man's attention. The man looked at it over and over again, and even put it in front of his nose and took a deep breath. Determined to make a bowl of noodles no matter what (42:25) "I once had a bowl of fried noodles in front of me, but I didn't know how to cherish it." In his memories, things that he didn't care about in the past make men cherish very much at this moment ,regret.

After crying bitterly, the man used a credit card to scrape the bird excrement on the duck's head. He was as happy as a child. It turned out that he remembered that there are seeds in the bird excrement to sow. It took me a long time to clear the land, plough the land, and fertilize it. The man used heavy spherical stones to plow out a large field. (48:15) During the hard work, the man tasted the salty taste of his sweat. He stuck out his tongue, He licked his arms hungrily. He let his tongue wander around his body while sighing that he was the most delicious and high-end food, even his legs and feet.

Feeling the joy of planting hope with his own hands, (49:10) the man took off the rope for hanging, tied a tie to the scarecrow, and put his arms around his partner. He pulled his underwear and smiled proudly. What the man didn't know was that there was a pair of eyes watching him at the moment.

Part3

If you want to eat a bowl of jajang noodles, it may only take three steps from placing an order. But this man needs to start by looking for seeds. Growing a bowl of fried noodles is the hope of a man's life. The girl ate hope brand noodles, admiring the man's proud face with his arms around the scarecrow. After observing the man for two months, the girl decided that the man was the same kind. After three years of autism, she developed a desire to communicate with the man. (53:30—55:23)) In the operation code-named The Great Escape to the Moon, the girl specially bought red wine, dressed ceremoniously, planned the route, and slipped out of the house in the dark to find the one who had been peeping for two months. man. The elevator stopped on the first floor, and the girl put a robot to lead the door guard, covered her face with a helmet, and used an umbrella to hide from the car. She was fully armed. After being frightened all the way, she came to the bridge bumpy, threw the red wine bottle into the river, and the action was completed. It turned out that she just wanted to be a drift bottle pen pal with a man in this way. The next morning, (55:56) the girl got up and ran to the camera, the beach was still hello, the man didn't receive her bottle, the girl was very disappointed.

Three months later, the man's home on the island has begun to take shape. His survival skills have improved by leaps and bounds, fishing, climbing trees, and using small bottles to collect sweat to season his food makes him uncomfortable. (59:29) It is another happy morning of picking up trash. The song of happy loan has changed from a man’s nightmare to a song in his mouth. The burdens of his past life can no longer defeat him. In his eyes, there is only the explosion of hope for the future. Sauce noodles. He found the girl's red wine bottle on the tree, and there was only a small hello printed in the corner on the big white paper. The man realized that someone was watching him and hurriedly put on his pants. After three months and seventeen days of sending the message, the girl finally waited for a response (1:02:19) Her world seemed to be flooded with a lot of sweetness and happiness at once

Another night, the girl repeated her old tricks. She went to the bridge and threw the bottle in full armor, but on the way back, she turned on her helmet and mask. What caught her eye were the flowers blooming under the warm street lamps. beautiful. The two communicated in such a clumsy way, and the man began to wonder about the identity of the other. At this moment, the seeds under the scarecrow grew small corn. Seeing that his hope was getting closer and closer, the man wept with joy.

The girl knew that the man wanted to eat fried noodles, so she ordered three bowls for him to send to the island in one go, which was hard for the delivery boy. Unexpectedly, the man didn't appreciate it, because in his heart, fried noodles was not a simple food, but a kind of hope. The girl picked up the noodles returned by the man, and ate it without mixing it. She also wanted to taste the taste of hope. The next day, the girl finally stopped avoiding her mother. She asked for some corn seeds to keep in the room and apologized to the man for throwing a drift bottle. The man was trying his best to play tricks on the beach and the girl, and the hearts of the two were getting closer and closer as they cared about each other warmly. Finally, the man ate the fried sauce noodles he had grown by himself. (1:20:57) The second mouthful of fried sauce noodles didn't go into his mouth, and tears fell into the bowl first. The man eats while crying, this is the rare happiness and hard heartache after grasping the hope. In the photo, the girl stroked the man's crying face and sent a blessing that only she knew. With the increase of communication between the two, the man became more and more curious about this unknown drifting bottle pen pal. He finally couldn't help but ask the girl's identity (1:26:06). The girl was reluctant to face her own reality and chose to reply with the image of an urban beauty through ps, but she was even more reluctant to face it with a false self. Man, this time, (1:27:18) she failed to throw the bottle. The man who couldn't find the drift bottle wrote a big why on the beach, and his questioning caused the girl to fall into even more pain.

(1:29:00-1:30:28) The girl closed the curtain, and the corn seedlings, which symbolized hope, fell into darkness again. On the computer screen, online messages that had not been opened for a long time turned out to be all vicious curses insulting the girl. The girl's fake online identity was ruthlessly exposed. Her hand clenched the mouse and clicked in a panic. The frightened and widened eyes, she bit her thin lips, and on her delicate face, her eyes, nose, and mouth began to tremble uncontrollably. Wrap yourself in a plastic bag.

There was a strong wind in the night, and a heavy rain came. The man desperately tried to hold his duck boat in the wind and rain, but finally he had to let go. Seeing that his physical and mental habitat was drifting away in the waves, he forced a smile and waved his hand. Say goodbye. The next morning, the girl used her camera to scan the small island swept by the wind. In the chaos, the man squatted helplessly in the ground, and the corn, cucumbers, peppers and eggplants that he had grown so hard were soaked in the sewage. A storm was enough to destroy his life, while the city on the other side, built of steel and concrete, stood still, as if nothing had happened.

The man fell into despair, but misfortunes did not come singly. A group of staff members suddenly came to the island and told him that this was a private plot and he could not stay here. The man struggled to escape, but was outnumbered and was knocked down and taken away from the island. The girl saw the lonely back of the man being taken away from the camera, and realized that if we don't see each other again, there may be no chance again. The girl finally rushed into the crowd during the day, rushing in the direction of the man despite everyone's amazed eyes. She finally arrived at the place where the man came ashore, but there was only a man-made Evian slippers left. Passing couples discussed Taishan and Brother Sharp, the girl hurriedly ran in the direction they passed by, the man got on the bus, the car started, the girl was still running, and the man in the bus was in a daze, unaware of it. Seeing the bus disappear at the apex of the road, the girl's faces twisted together in pain, tears streaming down her face. At this moment, the face of the man in the car was also wrinkled, and both of them wept bitterly for losing each other.

Just when the girl turned her head in desperation to leave, the alarm of the air defense exercise sounded again over the city. Hope sparked in the girl's eyes. It turned out that the air defense exercise had started, and all vehicles had to stop. The girl ran wild again and jumped on the bus that the man was riding. The two looked at each other and finally met. Under the puzzled eyes of the passengers, the girl went to the man to introduce herself (1:50:10), and both of them had long-lost and bright smiles on their faces. Another alarm sounded, the car shook, the man supported the staggering girl, and the two looked at each other again, without saying a thousand words. There are only two air defense drill alarms in a year, but it is the starting point and the end point of the two people's acquaintance. At the end of the film, a nest of bird eggs in the canned food on the island, bags of garbage and discarded helmets swept out of the room, heralding the new life of the two of them. And the duck boat that carried the man for several months drifted into the blue sea, and drifted to a wider spiritual habitat with the hope of the two. After experiencing a series of unbelievable things, the two finally joined hands and went to the sky.

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Castaway on the Moon quotes

  • Male Kim: After 7 years of saving up for a house, I finally got my own place.

  • Male Kim: Birds taste better than fish, perhaps evolution is the process to getting tastier.