Just my personal experience:
The front laying is very good, there is a lot of interaction, letters come and go, step by step. It was a little awkward from the moment when everyone in the church was open and honest, I mean the unfolding of the plot.
Oh, and Aster's invitation to that secret location was a bit sudden to me too, just treat it as telepathy, the description of her painting made her think she understood her, that's all.
To be honest, the kiss of the heroine at the end was also very abrupt, I'm sorry maybe I didn't understand it.
The clearest thing is that Paul fell in love with the heroine, and I vaguely felt this trend from the beginning. Paul is kind and cute. Unlike other messy classmates, he has a sense of justice and security, although he is a bit silly, haha. Anyway, the line between the heroine and him is more the main line, and the emotional line between the two girls is the branch line.
That's it, that's it.
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