"list of last wish"
This movie is very similar to "Green Book". Between blacks and whites, one has money and one has no money, and the other is vulgar and serious. When faced with a problem, they walk together and discover a new world other than their own lives. But this movie is better than Green Book. There are road movie elements, but not all of them are on the road. About a third of the movie starts to hit the road. The first half is not useless, but I feel that the first half Discuss the meaning of life and death.
The touching thing is that death is very unknown. Edward said that he is not a mortal and can face death alone, but when he looked at his appearance, his life was completely entangled by disease and turned into chaos. A mortal, but he doesn't admit it, he's used to not loving, he doesn't want to commit suicide in five stages, and when he knows the exact date of death, he is very open-minded after being sad, and that's when the journey really begins.
It's not so much a bucket list, it's actually something that everyone wants to do but is afraid to do or is unable to do. When these things are realized before death, filling the greatest regrets with the greatest beauty is a very special feeling. .
The story is from the point of view of Edward's assistant Matthew, echoing back and forth, and the narration and memory of Edward in Snow Mountain does not say that only what Matthew can see can be told. When writing the script, don't pay too much attention to the perspective. What's the matter? The theme of the movie is revealed at the beginning, and there is only one narration. Sometimes it is okay to not engage in so many flashback structures and only one point of effect.
At the end of each scene, I always don't know how to deal with the last line. In this movie, I use a question at the end, which gives infinite reverie. It seems that there are many other words behind. It's also good that the scene goes to the middle of the flash. When a character reads a letter, don't always let him sit there and read. You can use his voice as a narration, flash memories or quickly go through what he is experiencing at the moment, and you can also add lines from passers-by, but not too much.
When two people who are very different get along with each other, they must go through mutual exclusion to co-production, reconciliation, quarrel, and consciousness. When writing this process, don’t change it just because you pretend to be different. Every movie It's all the same, because A wants to care about B, but this is B's inverse scale, and they have a big fight because of unauthorized intervention. After returning, A has a lively and noisy, but B has nothing and is alone. Nothing goes well. At this time Food packaging can’t be opened, things can get stuck, and so on when everything goes wrong, and then the emotional outburst will not be abrupt. The loneliness and predicament of the rich are better expressed, so the most important thing is So that the rich are lonely.
If there is a comedy element, repeat a classic scene several times. This scene can occur in different places, different times and different situations, but the theme is happiness. When two or more people experience this happiness , the events are the same, the process is the same, the results are the same, and even the lines can be the same, which is easy to make an impression, but if the 20-minute short film is not necessary, it is easy to watch and make people upset.
Also, the density of the film is very loose, and no events are forced into it. Don't always impose bridges for the sake of expression. The rhythm part is not understood for the time being. It is about expressing the theme in the first two minutes. At thirty-four minutes, the movie name appears, and the journey begins. During the journey, it focuses on describing the beginning, physical problems and miracles. The miracle part is done after death. The foreshadowing, the space after returning is not too short, first experience the comparison, fall to the ground in the warmth, rush over after the break, a group of hospital shots is a farewell, and then go through the funeral, conventionally on the matter of the quarrel. Wanting to understand and fulfill this long-cherished wish, he also died in the end. On the snowy mountain, he echoed the theme again. It seems that my script still has the wrong weight in the title, don't show so many flowers and grass, not everyone is Lou Ye, there is still a problem with the rhythm in the middle part, the transition is a little stiff, but I still don't know how to improve the rhythm, let's watch it again Change it again.
The relationship between Matthew and Edward is also very classic, a bit like "The Queen Wears Prada", and the portrayal of subordinates in this way is conducive to adding cute elements to the rich and strict boss.
There is still love here, and there is not much love. To sum up, it is the part of getting old and finding love again. It is too late to be gentle. When you are ready to go to bed, the two are like virgins and fidgeting. Prepare carefully, too. It's cute. Sometimes it's very touching to be simple when you are in a complex situation. I hope you can learn it next time you write about crazy men and women.
Regarding the capacity of the story, this timeline is less than an hour in reality, but the story told is when Edward fell ill until he died, but the actual duration is three months. I hope you can think about the time issue in advance next time.
The problem, this timeline is less than an hour in reality, but the story told is when Edward got sick until he died, but the actual time is three months. I hope you can think about the time in advance next time.
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